Readme Introduction Reframed for better clarity (#6493)

Read me Introduction reframed for improving clarity

README.md

@@ -18,8 +18,7 @@ Or [Blockchain](<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blockchain_(database)>), for shor
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-Tendermint Core is Byzantine Fault Tolerant (BFT) middleware that takes a state transition machine - written in any programming language -
-and securely replicates it on many machines.
+Tendermint Core is a Byzantine Fault Tolerant (BFT) middleware that takes a state transition machine - written in any programming language - and securely replicates it on many machines.
 
 For protocol details, see [the specification](https://github.com/tendermint/spec).
 
@@ -30,9 +29,7 @@ see our recent paper, "[The latest gossip on BFT consensus](https://arxiv.org/ab
 
 Please do not depend on master as your production branch. Use [releases](https://github.com/tendermint/tendermint/releases) instead.
 
-Tendermint is being used in production in both private and public environments,
-most notably the blockchains of the [Cosmos Network](https://cosmos.network/).
-However, we are still making breaking changes to the protocol and the APIs and have not yet released v1.0.
+Tendermint has been in the production of private and public environments, most notably the blockchains of the Cosmos Network. we haven't released v1.0 yet since we are making breaking changes to the protocol and the APIs. 
 See below for more details about [versioning](#versioning).
 
 In any case, if you intend to run Tendermint in production, we're happy to help. You can
@@ -167,4 +164,4 @@ If you'd like to work full-time on Tendermint Core, [we're hiring](https://inter
 
 Funding for Tendermint Core development comes primarily from the [Interchain Foundation](https://interchain.io),
 a Swiss non-profit. The Tendermint trademark is owned by [Tendermint Inc.](https://tendermint.com), the for-profit entity
- that also maintains [tendermint.com](https://tendermint.com).
+ that also maintains [tendermint.com](https://tendermint.com).